In the beginning of The Alchemist, a fictional masterpiece by Paulo Coelho, Santiago is introduced. As an eighteen year old shepherd, much of Santiago’s character is given through indirect characterization. With a gift for leadership, Santiago guides his sheep for two years, and they come to completely rely on him. “They trust me, and they’ve forgotten how to rely on their own instincts, because I lead them to nourishment.” (Coelho 7) Santiago takes pride in his ability to lead his sheep successfully throughout the countryside.
Like many eighteen year old’s, he also demonstrates a sarcastic personality, as shown in the text as he is talking to the girl with the raven hair. ‘“How did you learn to read?’ The girl asked at one point. ‘Like everybody learns,” he responded ‘In school.”’(Coelho 6)
During his interaction with the Merchant’s daughter, he pays attention to her comely appearance, and how it differs greatly to his own scruffy beard and shaggy hair. Even a year after these happenings, he remembers and wishes to change his appearance, giving himself an insecurity.(Coelho 11) Santiago has a memorable encounter with the girl, who is taken aback when there is a shepherd who knows how to read.
And while Santiago is presented as independent, it almost appears that he is lonely, and longing for someone to talk to and be with. “He had always believed that the sheep were able to understand what he said. So there were times when he would read them parts of his books that made an impression upon him, or or when he would tell them of the loneliness or the happiness of a shepherd in the field.” (Coelho 4)
Santiago demonstrates his independence and leadership, while remaining humane with his sarcasm, and silent wish for a companion who is characterized with raven hair, and a mild surprise at the fact that a shepherd can read.
Santiago’s Character
This was really good I liked how you used some cool vocabulary words like comely (I think that is from our vocab in this class.). I also liked how you thought of his personality as sarcastic when he said “‘Like everybody does, In school.'” I think that how you said he was independent and that “it almost appeares that he is lonely” is used very well to describe Santiago as a independent and lonley person. This blog was very well put together and those three things were probably the best I could pick out (even though there were many more) good job on this blog.
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What an excellent analysis! Your post is very fluid and easy to understand. You did an excellent job using textual evidence. The way you cited the textual evidence though was incorrect. When you are citing you need to make sure that the period comes after the parentheses. For example, ” …blankity blank blank blank,” (SomePerson 23). If the quote ends with a period, then replace it with a comma, but if there is a exclamation point or question mark, just put it as is. Also make sure that you formatting is set so that the entire post is one paragraph. Excellent job on indirect citations!
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Thanks Jason, I wasn’t aware about the commas and stuff, so thanks for letting me know. As for the formatting, I like to format things in multiple paragraphs, but thank you for your input. I’m glad you enjoyed the post!
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